Most Artists Earn Low Salaries And Should Receive Funding From The Government

Art
is an excellent medium to reach
large audience
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a large audience
inorder
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in order
to convey contemporary issues, social messages, ideas, imaginations etc.,
however some
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however, some
arts very prevalent and attracts large
crowds some
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crowds, some
other
art
forms are endangered.Various
arts
Suggestion
art
forms include dance, painting, sculpting, drama, movie, theatre performances, tribal dance
froms
the phonological or orthographic sound or appearance of a word that can be used to describe or identify something
forms
forums
grams
,
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,
singing etc.
India especially
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India, especially
is a land of varied cultures and practices, each culture has mastered some
art
form to convey the message and
indentity
Suggestion
the identity
identity
of that particular culture, where most of them are now endangered or almost extinct as there are neither artists nor core community practicing it. Most of the
art
forms witnessed by our parents and grandparents have not reached our generation and which is a huge loss for
this
generation. The very critical factor to keep an
art
form alive is its performers and artists who preach and spread the
art
to
next generation
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the next generation
as well as
perfom
carry out or perform an action
perform
it.Sole reason for evasion of most of the
art
forms is lack of artists available,
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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