Write a letter to an electronic company requesting information about their latest model of digital camera you have seen advertised. Ask about the following items The price and availability of the new camera The exact size and special functions the set have

Dear Sir or Madam, Greeting’s of the day! Through

this

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letter, I want to express my interest in buying your latest digital camera, which is being advertised by your company as per the circular in 20th

Septemper’s

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September's

daily, ‘Times of India’ newspaper. Undoubtedly, your company not

inly

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only

sell

best

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the best

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camera’s in the market but

also

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offer them at reasonable prices. Despite the fact that

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apply

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there was only

launch

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a launch

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date mentioned in the newspaper, no

orher

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other

information about the product. So, I want to obtain all the necessary details about the camera.

Firstly

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, could you please provide the details of

price

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the price

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along with the availability of

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model in

toue

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your

authorised stores? If

this

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model is not available immediately,

than

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then

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please confirm

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apply

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how many days it will take after ordering it.

Secondly

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, neither there

was

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were

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any details regarding

rhe

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the

aize

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size

nor the functions in the newspaper. Would

tpu

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you

send me a

broucher

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brochure

this

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model in my mail? By doing so, I will be able to know about the exact size as well as its special features. I am

lookig

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looking

forward to hear from

tpu

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you

as soon as possible, as I am very keen to

prder

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order

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camera. Yours faithfully, Manjit

kaur

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Kaur

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kmanjit143

Feb 25, 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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202 words

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Write a letter to an electronic company requesting information about their latest model of digital camera you have seen advertised. Ask about the following items The price and availability of the new camera The exact size and special functions the set have

When employers choose the best person for job they should consider personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Wriggling critters armed with enzymes can break down plastics that would otherwise take decades, or even centuries to degrade.

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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