Write a letter to an electronic company requesting information about their latest model of digital camera you have seen advertised. Ask about the following items The price and availability of the new camera The exact size and special functions the set have

Dear Sir or Madam, Greeting’s of the day! Through
this
letter, I want to express my interest in buying your latest digital camera, which is being advertised by your company as per the circular in 20th
Septemper’s
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September's

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daily, ‘Times of India’ newspaper. Undoubtedly, your company not
inly
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only

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sell
best
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the best

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camera’s in the market but
also
offer them at reasonable prices. Despite the fact that
,
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apply

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there was only
launch
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a launch

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date mentioned in the newspaper, no
orher
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other

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information about the product. So, I want to obtain all the necessary details about the camera.
Firstly
, could you please provide the details of
price
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the price

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along with the availability of
this
model in
toue
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your

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authorised stores? If
this
model is not available immediately,
than
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then

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please confirm
me
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apply

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how many days it will take after ordering it.
Secondly
, neither there
was
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were

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any details regarding
rhe
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the

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aize
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size

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nor the functions in the newspaper. Would
tpu
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you

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send me a
broucher
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brochure

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of
this
model in my mail? By doing so, I will be able to know about the exact size as well as its special features. I am
lookig
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looking

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forward to hear from
tpu
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you

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as soon as possible, as I am very keen to
prder
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order

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this
camera. Yours faithfully, Manjit
kaur
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Kaur

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