An old car was left on the street near your apartment block several weeks ago. You telephoned the local council to get them to take it away, but nothing has been done about it. The car is now causing a problem for residents. Write a letter 1. Describe the car 2. outline the problems it is causing 3. tell the council what you want them to do

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Respected Sir, I am writing

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letter to complain about an old car parked illegally in my colony.

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was already reported over

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to your department

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month but no action has been taken on it so far. The license plate of the vehicle is MH56755 and is abandoned in dilapidated condition on Stanford Street in front of the exit of The Dereck Residences. It is

red

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Maruti Hyundai with

broken

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rear view

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mirror and deflated tyres. Since it is in the No Parking Zone, it has become troublesome not only for commuters but

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for the residents of the society. It is parked slightly at an outward angle on the street causing daily traffic jams.

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, there was an accident reported a week ago because of it.

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, I request you to look into

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matter on an urgent basis. Please make necessary arrangements to tow the car away from

residential

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area and take immediate action

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the owner of the car so that

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situation can be avoided in future. I will look forward

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your action. Yours faithfully, Rubina

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task achievement

Consider providing more details about the specific issues caused by the car, such as any safety concerns or impact on emergency services.

coherence and cohesion

Try to ensure that each paragraph maintains a clear focus. For example, you could separate the description of the car from the problems it is causing into distinct paragraphs for better clarity.

tone

Your letter has a respectful tone and appropriate level of formality.

detail

The description of the car is very clear and specific, which is helpful for the council.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

183 words

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