Nowadays, environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual person or individual country. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Environment
is at high risk, which is an undeniable truth when people, today, are facing an ever-increasing occurrence of natural disasters from tsunami, greenhouse effect, earthquake to global warming. It is believed that these consequences are the result of not a single
nation
, but the globe, and
thus
, it is time for the whole world to be responsible for
this
issue. I strongly agree with
this
idea.
First
, each person is an active agent to protect the
environment
. With each tree planted by an individual, greenness is widespread and
environment
will be saved eventually. What would happen actually in case that people of a
nation
are trying their utmost to protect the
environment
while others lift no hand to do
this
and even unremittingly release industrial waste in hope of fast- growing
industrialization
Suggestion
industries
industrial
?
That is
the reason why so as to rescue our beloved
environment
, governments of all nations are required to implement a joint-effort by following international regulations and setting up global treaties to limit the amount of
pollution
discharged by each country,
for example
, Kyoto.
Second
, in the context of industrialization, the economy of each country is reaching its heights, especially in the
third
world countries with their overheating economies.
Hence
, rarer would these governments prioritize environmental
pollution
, while caught in the economic race with other countries, if the radical international intervention was not imposed. Another example is that the radioactivity from nuclear plants, as a consequence of the unexpected earthquake in Japan, is infectious, threatening the survival of people domestically and species across the
nation
. The issue would be much exacerbated as other
neighboring
having a common boundary or edge; abutting; touching
neighbouring
nations are ignorant of
this
, and by
this
, they are, in fact, harming their own destinies as well. The action to lend technological support by developed nations to developing ones,
for instance
, the
environment
-friendly assembly line, is one of effective remedies to reduce
pollution
caused by the untreated industrial waste.
Finally
, when it comes to the issue of the overwhelming disappearance of endangered animals, which leads to ecological imbalance, by no means can a
nation
combat radically devoid of global support. Specious fishes in the ocean across different countries in a continent are culled uncontrollably by a group of people in a specific location for
sake
Suggestion
the sake
of profit. It is by dint of international drastic law on prohibiting the exploitation of rare species that our natural animal kingdom is less
intimidated
Suggestion
intimidating
. According to social surveys, annually, international teams of conservationists have caught global thieves who
endeavored
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavoured
to kill these animals for illegal trading. Put it simply, without the world’s attempt, the
environment
is definitely in danger,
as a result
of
pollution
and
vast disappearance
Suggestion
the vast disappearance
of key animals to balance.
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