Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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Law plays a vital role in directing the behaviour of a person in

acceptable manner

Suggestion

an acceptable manner

. To control the

unneccessary

not necessary

unnecessary

necessary

noise

Government should

made

Suggestion

make

some strict rules and regulations. Excessive

noise

has some

deletrious

harmful to living things

deleterious

effects on human health. But legislation has some advantages as well as some

prones

dried plum

prunes

aprons

brownies

for the peoples.

Firstly

their

in or at that place

there

are various instruments

Accept space

factories, vehicles, horns,

music system

Suggestion

a music system

that contributes to

noise

pollution.

Noise

more than 80 Hz has some bad impact on a person. It

can leads

Suggestion

can lead

to temporary or permanent deafness.

Secondly

, excessive

noise

can

leads

Suggestion

lead

to some neurological defects in person. Strict laws about volume of

noise

resedential

used or designed for residence or limited to residences

residential

areas, near schools and market places should be made.

Penalities

Suggestion

Penalties

should be made along with some period of imprisonment. Government should set some

guidlines

a light line that is used in lettering to help align the letters

guidelines

that how much volume people can use and proper time limit should be

their

in or at that place

there

. For examples In many cities in India late light Dj is not permissible, only

maximum

Suggestion

a maximum

upto

10:00pm youth can play

Djs

a member of the genus Canis (probably descended from the common wolf) that has been domesticated by man since prehistoric times; occurs in many breeds

dogs

. All the factories should timely check all the equipments and machines and timely services should be done for the machines who produces more

noise

. Labourers should give protective ear pieces to

avoide

stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something

avoid

evade

abide

noise

Governement

Suggestion

Government

should purchase low sound producing machines. Traffic police should timely check whether any vehicle put more horns

ans

in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

appropriate actions should be made. But somewhere making strict laws

creat

make or cause to be or to become

create

created

conflits

an open clash between two opposing groups (or individuals)

conflicts

among

population

Suggestion

the population

and make them more

voilent

acting with or marked by or resulting from great force or energy or emotional intensity

violent

. Purchasing more less sound producing machines increases the

lode

weight to be borne or conveyed

load

on the government. In conclusion,

rules

Suggestion

the rules

should be made by Government to regulate the desirable behaviour of individuals

againt

in contact with

against

again

producing excessive sound.

Noise

pollution is a one of the health

concern

Suggestion

concerns

and all the global nations should work together to stop

this

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1Word repetition
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287 words

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Relevant & specific examples

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Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Fully explain your ideas

Children brought up in families with less money are better prepared for life than those from wealthy families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Learning English is important. Agree or disagree ?

We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

Some people think that the media have to right to publish detail of people’s view, while other thinks it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

In some countries, secondary school aims to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?