You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. in your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing with regard to your advertisement for a teacher, who will help your kids learn
Persian
for a year.
I hope this
message finds you well. I believe I will be able to teach your offsprings
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offspring
Persian
in one year, due to
my educational background as a master of the Persian
language. In addition
, Persian
is also
my mother tongue which is an undeniable benefit for me as a language provider.
Moreover
, I will manage to make your family more familiar with the Iranian culture which is linked to our language. Additionally
, I am a good chef and I would be able to provide you with Persian
dishes. If I tell you Iranian foods are the most delicious ones in the world, I am not exaggerating it.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. I am a student here in Australia and I have some spare time to earn money. In fact, the opportunity of teaching your children not only helps me to earn some money but also
makes me able to sharpen my teaching skills.
I hope you will consider my situation favourably.
Yours faithfully
Ali ASubmitted by ali on
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coherence cohesion
Enhance logical structure by using a clear and consistent paragraph structure that organizes information in a way that is easy for the reader to follow.
coherence cohesion
To improve single idea per paragraph, try to focus each paragraph on a single topic or aspect of your argument, providing adequate development and support before moving on to the next point.
task achievement
Include specific example or experiences to showcase your abilities and your experiences with teaching or language instruction could enhance the task achievement score.
task achievement
It's beneficial to directly address each point in the prompt to ensure a more complete response. Make sure to explicitly state why you would be suitable, what else you could do for the family, and your reasons for wanting the job.
task achievement
Maintain a polite and professional tone throughout the letter - you are already doing well with this, but remember to keep this consistency if you add more content or examples.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite