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With the increase in the technology, people
accordingly
 change time to time. Some people’s hobbies are reading books, magazines, newspaper, etc. In their present life they read all
this things
Suggestion
these things
this thing
 in the soft copy (
e-
book
) on their mobile phones, laptop etc..
In contrast
, other people still connect with the hard books or
paper
 books.
Firstly
, the affirmatives of the
e-
book
 users are operating their phone and laptop anytime, anywhere either in the morning or at night. The advantage of
that is
 they have no stress to storage the large size
paper
book
 or hard copy of any
book
. It is reliable in each and every situation. People are up to date with the latest news in the market at the same time. But, the disadvantage of
this
 is to maintain the concentrate and focus on the particular subject while reading their column in
e-
book
. Because, there are many other things which will interrupt while reading on the mobile phones and laptops. Recent research on that, only 15-20% people who use their cell phones or other gadgets to read like
E-
book
 are only to complete the whole things with high concentrate. Other 75 – 85% people are interrupted by messaging app or any other advertisement. Apart from
this
, there are some users to read only
paper
book
instead
 of
e-
book
 in
this
 modern world. The advantage of that they will never lose their concentration while reading
paper
 books.
Besides
 that they do not want to be in the part of the present technological world. But the disadvantage in these is to handle the hard copy and to store with them.
Moreover
, they did not use
this
 in incongruous places which
this
 is not suitable.
Also
, they do not read in the bedtime and
also
 they will not have to connect with
this
 world and stay updated. To conclude, both the views are biased in those which are comfortable and suitable in their life. But in the rise of the technology, the young generation is quite biased towards
this
e-
book
 side
instead
 of
paper
book
 reading.

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