You have recently moved into a company accommodation and you are facing some issues at the place. Write a letter to your HR department. In the letter, mention: • A brief description of your accommodation. • What problems are you facing? • What do you expect the company to do about it?

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing

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letter to express my concern about the accommodation provided by the company. I moved in with my family

last

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month. I am thankful to you for a fully furnished flat with a spacious kitchen and balcony with an amazing city view.

However

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, I am facing some issues in my apartment which require your kind attention.

Firstly

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, the elevator stopped working within two weeks after we moved. It has become extremely difficult for my old grandfather to climb stairs because he has recently undergone knee surgery, and our house is on the fifth floor.

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, I have noticed that tap water is not drinkable because of the rusty pipes.

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I have multiple times complained to management about the problems, I did not get any positive response from their end. I would like to draw your attention towards it and solve my concern. I am looking forward to your positive response. Your faithfully, Rushabh Patel

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Sep 2, 2025

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task response

Be clear on what you want done. Say 'Please fix the lift by [date]' and 'Please check the pipes so the water is safe to drink'.

coherence

Split ideas into two blocks. One for the lift, one for the water. This will help the flow.

greeting closing

Check the closing. Use 'Yours faithfully' if you do not know the name.

tone

Keep a calm and polite tone in the whole letter.

tone

Polite and calm tone.

content

Clear view of the flat and the issues.

structure

Good opening that shows thanks.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

160 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Written books are not needed because we can read almost everything on the Internet”. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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