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Some people think living in a country for a period of time is needed to learn the language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Learning a foreign
language
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 and about a different
culture
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 is not an easy task. Some people believe that a person should live in a country to learn about that specific
region
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, especially
language
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 and
culture
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. I believe that
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 is the best way to learn while other different methodologies can help. Living in another country is a surefire way to accelerate your way to learn a new
language
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 and
culture
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. From
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nguage's learning perspective,
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a language learning perspective
language learning perspective
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listening to natives while trying to initiate a conversation with them helps to learn a lot about the linguistic style. Adding to
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, experiencing local festivals and attending different cultural events will make the journey of learning enjoyable. My cousin,
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, came to India from Canada to learn about Punjab's cultural values. In short, learning by having the
first
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-hand experience makes the process easier and faster. Having said that, there are other different methods available, nowadays, that helps to learn about different
language
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 and the
culture
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 without staying in a specific
region
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. Using au
diobooks,
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Audiobooks
listening to podcasts and watching movies, from that
region
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, may help to learn different aspects. To exemplify, I le
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learned
bout British
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 by watching web series based on the love story of a couple from Britain.
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, it
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 helped me to learn an accent and tuned my ears to listen to English. To conclude,
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 by living in a specific country one can learn by
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an help without moving to a particular
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