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The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.
#information #species #birds #woodchuck #county #times #year
The table above
illustrate
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 the 8 detected
birds
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bird
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species
. they were
observered
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observed
 in two sessions:
winter
 and
summer
. each of the listed
birds
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bird
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species
were
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 observed in Woodchuck County.
Over all
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, most
birds
 appeared in
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the summer
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summer
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summertime
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time
.the less amount spotted in
winter
,
while
 three of the
birds
typs
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types
 observed in both
winter
 and
summer
. that means they are not
a
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migrent
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migrant
birds
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.
Summer
 in
Woodchuch
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Woodchuck
 is the
favorate
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favourite
 period of
time
 to spend for the eight
species
.
birds
seems
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 to like Woodchuck's
summer
 indeed, as the table
showes
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shows
. Clearly,
summer
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summertime
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time
 scored the most viewed bird
species
.Bluebirds, Mockingbirds, Orioles and
woodeckers
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woodpeckers
 all showed up in
this
 session.Woodchuck County would be an
exibition
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exhibition
 of
birds
. Meanwhile,
winter
time
 observed relatively only one type called Juncos.Juncos prefer to spend
summer
 somewhere else.
however
, Woodpeckers, Crows and Cardinals have been seen
in
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 both times of the year. they must be
a
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Woodchunck
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Woodchuck
 based
birds
.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birds, species, winter, summer, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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