Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

To date, much wildlife has become extinct around the world.
Although
some people insist that
this
is the main environmental
problem
, in my opinion, global warming is a more serious environmental
problem
. The reason why some people are so focused on plant and animal lives is that more and more
species
are dying out.
This
problem
has been caused by human activities,
such
as cutting a lot of rainforests to build the cities. If we continue taking
such
action, the ecosystem will be more seriously damaged.
This
means that the food chain will
also
be disturbed, and many more
species
will become extinct.
For example
, in the state of Utah in the U.S. t
he
Suggestion
The
population of deer has dramatically increased because of the decrease in the number of pumas eating deer due to our o
verhunting.
Consequently
, deer have eaten plants too much and many
species
of plants have disappeared there. Despite the above argument, I strongly believe that we need to pay as much attention to global warming as we can.
This
is because
this
environmental
problem
endangers not only plants and animals but
also
even us. Global warming allows the polar ice caps to melt and sea level to rise, which creates the fear of lowland areas going under the sea.
For example
, Tuvalu which is an island nation in Polynesia is well-known as one of the lowland areas exposed to the threat of going under the sea.
Also
, global warming causes climate change with flooding and d
roughts more
Accept comma addition
droughts, more
common on our earth. To conclude, it is apparent to me that taking care of global warming is more crucial than the extinction of specific
species
of plants and animals.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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