Since most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, museum are not needed anymore.To what extent do you agree?

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Museum

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The museum

has a vital role to keep alive the past and tradition of a country or a nation. Even though

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regarding

history

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and culture

are

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is

available on the

internet

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, the

museum

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has its own importance to uphold the

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in a vivid way. In my opinion, to have a primary idea, sources of the

internet

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can be useful, while the

museum

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is still essential to have depth knowledge.  There is no doubt that the

internet

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contains plenty of

information

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about the

history

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of mankind and the tradition of a nation. While people can easily educate themselves by surfing through the various sources of the

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,

this

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does not mean that the necessity of the

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has reduced.

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,

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on the

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is not

as accurate as always

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always as accurate

.

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, people could have wrong

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about other cultures or

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.

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, searching on

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about world war 2, different types of

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will appear, which confuse a person about what to accept.

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therefore

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Therefore

, Confusion can be taken away by visiting a

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and can

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have trustworthy

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regarding the

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of world war 2.

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, To study our past, the

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still has its own importance.

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, scientists are always studying the fossil of dinosaurs to know our

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.

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, the

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let us experience the culture and

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in person, while it is totally impossible through the

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.  To conclude, The

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and

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museum both

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museum, both

play a vital role to enlighten the past and tradition of mankind. The

Internet

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can be used to gain a general idea, while the

museum

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will ensure the accuracy of the

information

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.