The graph below shows radio and television audiences of United Kingdom throughout the day in the year 1992.

The graph below shows radio and television audiences of United Kingdom throughout the day in the year 1992.
The line graph demonstrates the
percentage
of
people
in the UK who used two different electronic media, namely
television
and
radio
in a single day from October to December in the year
of
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1992.
Overall
,
It is clear that
radio
had a high number of users in the morning,
while
television
had at the beginning of the night.
Also
,
television
has been watched by more
people
who are over the age of 4 than the number of
people
listening to
radio
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the radio
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. At 1 O'
clock
, nearly 7% of
people
used
television
and
this
percentage
fluctuated in a range of around 3% to 5% until 11 am. The number of users
then
slightly increased to  15% at 13 O'
clock
before reaching a high of 45% at 20 O'
clock
. The
percentage
declined rapidly to 15%
at the end
of the day.
On the contrary
,
radio
is being heard by less than 5% of
people
at 1 am and
this
pattern continued until 6 O'
clock
, which was followed by a sudden increase to 25% at 7 O'
clock
. The
percentage
of users dropped slowly from
this
point and hit a low of 5%
at the end
of the night.
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