The graph below shows radio and television audiences of United Kingdom throughout the day in the year 1992.
The line graph demonstrates the
percentage
of people
in the UK who used two different electronic media, namely television
and radio
in a single day from October to December in the year of
1992.
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Overall
, It is clear that
radio
had a high number of users in the morning, while
television
had at the beginning of the night. Also
, television
has been watched by more people
who are over the age of 4 than the number of people
listening to radio
.
At 1 O'Add an article
the radio
clock
, nearly 7% of people
used television
and this
percentage
fluctuated in a range of around 3% to 5% until 11 am. The number of users then
slightly increased to 15% at 13 O'clock
before reaching a high of 45% at 20 O'clock
. The percentage
declined rapidly to 15% at the end
of the day.
On the contrary
, radio
is being heard by less than 5% of people
at 1 am and this
pattern continued until 6 O'clock
, which was followed by a sudden increase to 25% at 7 O'clock
. The percentage
of users dropped slowly from this
point and hit a low of 5% at the end
of the night.Submitted by rahat2928 on
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