The graph below shows radio and television audiences of United Kingdom throughout the day in the year 1992.

The graph below shows radio and television audiences of United Kingdom throughout the day in the year 1992.
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The line graph demonstrates the
percentage
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of
people
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in the UK who used two different electronic media, namely
television
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and
radio
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in a single day from October to December in the year
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1992.
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,
It is clear that
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radio
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had a high number of users in the morning,
while
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television
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had at the beginning of the night.
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,
television
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has been watched by more
people
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who are over the age of 4 than the number of
people
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listening to
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radio
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. At 1 O'
clock
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, nearly 7% of
people
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used
television
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and
this
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percentage
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fluctuated in a range of around 3% to 5% until 11 am. The number of users
then
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slightly increased to  15% at 13 O'
clock
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before reaching a high of 45% at 20 O'
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. The
percentage
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declined rapidly to 15%
at the end
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of the day.
On the contrary
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,
radio
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is being heard by less than 5% of
people
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at 1 am and
this
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pattern continued until 6 O'
clock
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, which was followed by a sudden increase to 25% at 7 O'
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. The
percentage
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of users dropped slowly from
this
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point and hit a low of 5%
at the end
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of the night.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, people, television, radio, clock with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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