A lot of money is spent on repairing old buildings. Instead of repairing old buildings that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new one. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Ancient
architecture
has become a thing of the past, we are the generation that has witnessed the transformation from conventional methods of
construction
method to prefabricated streets and till the recent development of 3-D printed buildings.
Although
development infrastructure and building is costly and time consuming: These efforts can be justified only based on the
cost
benefit ratio it provides.
Therefore
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
partially agree, as it would be a better option to renovate old buildings and use them if they fulfil the prerequisites.
Firstly
, let us compare the quality of the
architecture
what our ancestors were able to create and what best we can produce today. One of the best examples would be the comparison of the Akshardam Temple at Delhi, which was constructed in the
last
decade to any ancient palaces or temples.
Although
the intention behind the
construction
of Akshardam Temple is to build a magnificent temple repairing the ancient
architecture
by using the modern technology, but the result of these good efforts is no match to any of those magnificent ancient temples or palaces, which have lasted for many centuries. Many of the older buildings in the northern part of India, namely Rajasthan, Agra, Delhi etc. Been renovated and transformed into restaurants and hotels.
This
has rejuvenated the look of the building and retained the essence of ancient
architecture
,
thus
resulting in a unique luxury experience for the quests who visit the place.
Secondly
, let us weigh the
cost
and time that goes into both these efforts,
however
Accept comma addition
however, this
this
would be a subjective analysis considering the structural stability of the building, but considering
otherwise
; definitely, repairing and renovating the existing buildings would be a
cost
effective option with the added advantage of the unwanted experience it would provide for its users. Time of
construction
would again be a subjected discussion considering the technology being used for demolition and
construction
of new buildings. To conclude, renovation of existing buildings would make life easier if the required prerequisites can be met by doing so or else the only available option would be to demolish and rebuild irrespective of the
cost
of
construction
.
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