Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? give reasons for your answers and give relevant examples

there

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There

is a saying that own's place is a own's place.

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however

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However

, owing and living in a

house

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or apartment is still a debatable topic. Some

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

apartments are the best

place whereas

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place, whereas

, others count more for the

house

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.

personally

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Personally

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

support the

later

referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)

latter

one, as it provides a sense of freedom and eliminates out the former one's restrictions and complications. People

accomodating

helpful in bringing about a harmonious adaptation

accommodating

themselves in an apartment are usually free from the worries of security and

maintainance which

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maintenance, which

maintenance which

turns out to be a huge

responsibilty

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

responsibilities

when it come to living in a

house

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.

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this

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This

freedom is at the sake of a lot

exxpenditure

money paid out; an amount spent

expenditure

expenditures

.

living

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Living

in apartment requires monthly deposit for

maintainance

activity involved in maintaining something in good working order

maintenance

, security along with the combined facilities

such

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as lift.

This

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adds on to become a huge amount which is much more than living in a

house

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. According to the press release by India Today, it was observed that 40% salary of the individual living in a flat goes into

such

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maintainance

activity involved in maintaining something in good working order

maintenance

bills.

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on

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On

the other hand, people owing a

houses

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house

, enjoy the perk of living in own desired infrastructure unlike apartments.

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furthermore

in addition

Furthermore

, they can have their own terrace where they can plant their own garden or enjoy with family during their leisure time.

they

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They

neither have to bother themselves with the strident noises of the neighbour above or below nor they have to go far for parking their vehicles. A recent survey revealed that people living in their own houses tend to remain more happy with a sense of freedom in comparison to the ones residing in flat.

to

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To

conclude,

although

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apartments provide a sense of more security, living in houses has still greater benefits, which cannot be superseded by the advantages provided by the apartments.