Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? give reasons for your answers and give relevant examples

there
Suggestion
There
is a saying that own's place is a own's place.
however
Suggestion
However
, owing and living in a
house
or apartment is still a debatable topic. Some
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
apartments are the best
place whereas
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place, whereas
, others count more for the
house
.
personally
Suggestion
Personally
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
support the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
one, as it provides a sense of freedom and eliminates out the former one's restrictions and complications. People
accomodating
helpful in bringing about a harmonious adaptation
accommodating
themselves in an apartment are usually free from the worries of security and
maintainance which
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maintenance, which
maintenance which
turns out to be a huge
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
when it come to living in a
house
.
this
Suggestion
This
freedom is at the sake of a lot
exxpenditure
money paid out; an amount spent
expenditure
expenditures
.
living
Suggestion
Living
in apartment requires monthly deposit for
maintainance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
, security along with the combined facilities
such
as lift.
This
adds on to become a huge amount which is much more than living in a
house
. According to the press release by India Today, it was observed that 40% salary of the individual living in a flat goes into
such
maintainance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
bills.
on
Suggestion
On
the other hand, people owing a
houses
Suggestion
house
, enjoy the perk of living in own desired infrastructure unlike apartments.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, they can have their own terrace where they can plant their own garden or enjoy with family during their leisure time.
they
Suggestion
They
neither have to bother themselves with the strident noises of the neighbour above or below nor they have to go far for parking their vehicles. A recent survey revealed that people living in their own houses tend to remain more happy with a sense of freedom in comparison to the ones residing in flat.
to
Suggestion
To
conclude,
although
apartments provide a sense of more security, living in houses has still greater benefits, which cannot be superseded by the advantages provided by the apartments.
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