While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is a concern to many that global warming is becoming a most significant

environment

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environmental

issue

. Some believe that people should pay more attention on the

issue

of

deforestation

because it has a more serious influence on the world. In my opinion, the growing

population

is the core problem which we should

firstly

address. Global warming causes two serious

environment

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environmental

problems.

Firstly

, it is increasing the global average temperature linearly and

this

is caused by the greenhouse gas which is highly unlikely to be reused.

In other words

, when the temperature starts rising, there are no tools or technologies to decrease it or even stop it.

Secondly

,

land mass

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the land mass

is

reducing

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reduced

because the sea level is increasing considerably.

For example

, according to research, several islands will be submerged by the rising ocean volume in the

next

few

decades resulting

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decades, resulting

in global warming, leading to major

environment

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environmental

issues. The

deforestation

is becoming an irreversible

problem especially

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problem, especially

in the developing countries. These countries are biased towards

deforestation

for development of various economic reasons,

therefore

they overuse

deforestation

for

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of

resources

such

as wood. Once the trees and forests have

be

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been

cut down, these affected areas need decades to recover,

furthermore

, some areas may never be able to grow trees again.

For instance

, parts of the rainforest in some developing countries have been destroyed completely.

Therefore

,

deforestation

has much more negative influence than its economic profits. The growing

population

is the main

issue

, which can lead to the problems stated above. More people

means

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mean

more cars, buses and power stations,

such

facilities

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facility's

discharge large amounts of greenhouse gas every day. Increased

population

means a need for more space, as well as more food to live, resulting in increasing the size of cities and farmlands. In some countries,

deforestation

becomes necessary because they need the land to feed the mass

population

. So, we are facing the real

issue

in the world is the growing

population

. In conclusion, it is true that global warming can cause some serious

environment

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environmental

problems and

deforestation

can be an irreversible

issue

in some developing countries.

However

, the real global

issue

which we are facing is the growing

population

and if we solve it

first

, we could address the global warming and

deforestation

at the same time.