While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is a concern to many that global warming is becoming a most significant

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environment

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environmental

issue

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. Some believe that people should pay more attention on the

issue

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of

deforestation

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because it has a more serious influence on the world. In my opinion, the growing

population

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is the core problem which we should

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address. Global warming causes two serious

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environment

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environmental

problems.

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, it is increasing the global average temperature linearly and

this

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is caused by the greenhouse gas which is highly unlikely to be reused.

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, when the temperature starts rising, there are no tools or technologies to decrease it or even stop it.

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,

land mass

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the land mass

is

reducing

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reduced

because the sea level is increasing considerably.

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, according to research, several islands will be submerged by the rising ocean volume in the

next

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few

decades resulting

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decades, resulting

in global warming, leading to major

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environment

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environmental

issues. The

deforestation

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is becoming an irreversible

problem especially

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problem, especially

in the developing countries. These countries are biased towards

deforestation

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for development of various economic reasons,

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they overuse

deforestation

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for

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of

resources

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as wood. Once the trees and forests have

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been

cut down, these affected areas need decades to recover,

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, some areas may never be able to grow trees again.

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, parts of the rainforest in some developing countries have been destroyed completely.

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,

deforestation

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has much more negative influence than its economic profits. The growing

population

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is the main

issue

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, which can lead to the problems stated above. More people

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mean

more cars, buses and power stations,

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facilities

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facility's

discharge large amounts of greenhouse gas every day. Increased

population

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means a need for more space, as well as more food to live, resulting in increasing the size of cities and farmlands. In some countries,

deforestation

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becomes necessary because they need the land to feed the mass

population

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. So, we are facing the real

issue

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in the world is the growing

population

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. In conclusion, it is true that global warming can cause some serious

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environment

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environmental

problems and

deforestation

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can be an irreversible

issue

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in some developing countries.

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, the real global

issue

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which we are facing is the growing

population

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and if we solve it

first

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, we could address the global warming and

deforestation

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at the same time.