The chart illustrated the percentage of people using the television and radio in the UK during a day in 1992.
Overall
, Linking Words
number
of them had never exceeded the ratio of %50.
LookingChange the article
a number
the number
a
graph of users of television, we see that the percentage of television Change preposition
at a
audience
had increased Fix the agreement mistake
audiences
about
%5 from zero between 6 a.Change preposition
by about
m
. and noon. Use synonyms
Then
, it Linking Words
had
reached the peak value Unnecessary verb
apply
about
%50 at 8 p.Change preposition
of about
m
. by increasing markedly. Use synonyms
However
, after that value, the gradual declining had occurred until 2 a.Linking Words
m
. Use synonyms
Finally
, the ratio almost Linking Words
had
remained Unnecessary verb
apply
same
in Correct article usage
the same
Linking Words
next
4 hours.
Turning to the changesCorrect article usage
the next
Change preposition
in
of
the radio audiences, it is clearly seen that, from 6 a.Change preposition
in
m
. to 10 a.Use synonyms
m
. the percentage of them had rocketed to its peak value Use synonyms
nearly
%30 from about %5. Change preposition
of nearly
However
, despite Linking Words
the
some exception, it was followed by Remove the article
apply
the
considerably decreasing to reach about %3 Correct article usage
a
in
the beginning of the day.Change the preposition
at