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In many major cities around the globe the amount of traffic is growing. What do you think are the causes of this? Can you suggest some possible solutions?

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Most people would agree that in most of the big cities all over the world the number of transportation is growing very fast. The causes of
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 are the speed of life, urbanization and
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 the individualistic approach to it. The solutions to it you will see below. On the one hand, people talk about the importance of nature and the importance of being close to
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it, but
 we see that more and more people
move
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 from rural places to urban areas. In my point of view the main cause of
traffic
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 growth is overpopulated cities. It is understandable why people prefer living in big cities: they provide more opportunities and different types of activities for young people as well as for old people. Another important reason for
traffic
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 growing is individualistic lifestyle. People prefer to be free and not to depend on any means of transportation but their own cars. So they can
move
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 in space independently whenever they want. Though the reasons for
traffic
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 are quite reasonable, there are ways and solutions to improve the situation. There are families consisting of 4 or 5 people and each member of the family has a car. I presume that it would be an option to reduce the amount of cars that families could owe. It would
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 be better to
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 universities and big companies from big cities to small towns. Another obvious solution is inputting bikes as
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a means
 of transportation, which is very healthy for people as a sport activity as well as good for the environment. By using bikes we will reduce the pollution level. To conclude, the
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 growth is a big challenge for
humankind which
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humankind, which
 should be taken into consideration especially by urban designers and architects. Contemporary society is getting more
individualistic which
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individualistic, which
 is causing more problems,
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 as I mentioned above. But the love for nature can make us
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 from cities to villages and rural places, which will lower the population and
traffic
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 in the big cities.
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