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The most important decision that young people have to follow is what career to choose. do you agree or disagree?

#decision #people #career
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Now, The young generation has to decide the most crucial decision about their
life
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 that what
career
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 path to choose for their
future
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. Because,
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 is the time when you decide what will you do in your
future
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 to earn money for you and support your family. I totally agree with it.
Firstly
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, Suggestion from my side of young people that stay calm in
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 process and
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 decide in their mind what is my strength and my weakness? After work up on
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, They have to think that which is proper field which one they love to select for the rest of their
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 without feeling any depression and stress. Simply, Think twice and
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 select a proper field which you can think of your own development and growth.
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, not run and think after what other people and my friend chose. It is your major decision for your whole
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 so you did not waste your time to see what others do. Find your strong zone and work on them for you, better grow and
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future
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the future
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, Do not get empathised yourself while set your
career
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.
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, Not listen what your parents and relative force to do something
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 of you do not like that thing for your
career
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. Because,
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 is your chance whether do it for your own and makes your
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 bright or else screw it everything and
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 apologies for yourself for the entire
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. To conclude, The major decision for the young generation is definitely about their
career
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 and
future
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 scope. I recommend that all parents should support their children for whatever they do. I completely agree with
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