Some people believe that restoration of old buildings costs too much; we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some of the people argue that the price of the
restoration
is really expensive for
this
reason they said that we should reconstruct them.As for me old buildings that have ancient traditions should be protected people cultural features and touristic attractions.But others should be erased and buıld news ones
instead
ofsaving
money an
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of saving
d
time
.
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with,traditon
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,
l features
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
are precious for both tourist and
also
local residents.Because people are eager to visit and touch historical buildings.For
this
reason mınıster of culture should protect their historical buıldıngs with
restoration
.
Although
restoration
can be much more expensive when we compare the price of new buıldıng construction.Governments should respect their histories because ,fortuna
te
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,
ly countries can subsıdıze their restorations budget from their touristic
incomes
a person (or institution) to whom legal title to property is entrusted to use for another's benefit
trustees
without having to spend much more money and
time
,since t
o
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,
urist are mostly willing to visit these types of buildıngs.In
this
wise they will leave some amount of money in these places.
Besides
ancient historical structures have important role for the people lives,since th
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y take can find a chance to imagine their former residents
lifes wi
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residents'
t
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a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
files
help of the these types of buıldıngs.
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,Mustafa
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emal Atatürk who founder o
f the R
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the founder
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y lived in small hou
se in Selan
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a small house
ik.İf we had demolished
this
hous
es
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this house
these houses
instead
of restorations we would probably have not find a ch
ance
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found
to imagine his lifes.
a characteristic state or mode of living
life
In addition
,old buıl
d
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,
ıngs that dont have
any
do not
don't
historical or tradional
features
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
should be replaced by new ones.Because
restoration
needs much more special stuffs than reconstruction.These speacil s
tuffs a
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
special
re so valuable and thats why
they
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that's
are so expensive.For
this
reasons i
t is un
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reason
neccesa
ry to
absolutely essential
necessary
restor
at
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for
ion .Governm
en
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.
ts should buıld new ones
instead
of old ones to save their budgets.
Also
restroati
ons need to
a principle that limits the extent of something
restrictions
registrations
restorations
mush more effort and special knowledges,since th
e
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,
y need scientific knowledge.So experts organise meeting to dıscuss their road maps when they make
restoration
.For
thi
s
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.
reasons u
nfortunately ıt will
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reasons, unfortunately
reason unfortunately
reason reason unfortunately
take much more
time
when we compare the construction new buıldıngs.Governments should save their precious
time
,making n
e
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,
w buıldıngs
instead
of old buldıngs that have no special features. In conclusıon,most of
t
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,
he people argued that restrotai
on are real
a principle that limits the extent of something
restriction
l
y e
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is
xpensive and new buıldıngs sould be
const
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
ructed
instead
of them.I agree them with the old buıldıngs which have no traditional meanings because ın
this
wise government might protect their budgets and times.But ı certainly disagree with them for the historical buıldıngs,since th
e
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,
se types of buıldıngs have really cu
rıal role for the
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a really curıal role
p
ubl
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in
ıc culture and
also
the are really effective for the tourist attraction.

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