Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays, with
rapid growth
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the rapid growth
of urban life people
try
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tries
to spend their holidays far from
hustle
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the hustle
and bustle in cities. Usually they arrange trips to go to the
nature
for relaxing and gathering enough energy for the rest of the life. Among them people make a plan to travel to unusual places
such
as
desert
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the desert
or mountainous area even if going to these kinds of places always have themselves difficulties.
This
essay will shed some light on
this
subject and analyse the positive and negative points of view while extend my partial support to the negative points before arriving at a conclusion. The
nature
of the humans has been
wanted
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wanting
to explore new things and places. In fact, they want to know more and more about their neighbours. One of the benefits of travelling to intact places is not only can they make unforgettable remembrance of their
trip but
Accept comma addition
trip, but
also
, they may have more tranquil in that zones which are free of any urban parasites. Spending time in
not well-known environment
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a not well-known environment
the not well-known environment
not well-known environments
can free people’s Soul and improve their mental health.
Moreover
, finding Uncharted lands has
direct effect
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a direct effect
on economic grow of every country. I mean that
tourism industry
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the tourism industry
can be improved by
recognisability
these natures, because more people travel to that
places
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place
for visiting many new things that are exclusive just for that area. Of course, they spend lots of money that help to rise up
financial situation
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the financial situation
of each country. Visiting these locations,
furthermore
, will be an affordable, because nobody is
started
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starting
to run a business
on
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at
in
that
places
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place
.
For instance
, tourists do not need to pay for parking or camping or even do not need to pay more money for entrance. People usually sleep in Tent so accommodation is free too.
On the other hand
, travelling to untouched
nature
can destroy the ecosystem by constructing new buildings or deforestation in big scale. It is clear dad soil and water will be polluted by human activities,
consequently
demolishing the environment is the
first
drawbacks of travelling to intact
nature
.
In addition
, these places are usually not very safe, I should mention that tourists are always in danger due to burglars and thieves. Offenders know that the security guard of
government
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the government
cannot
covered
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cover
these zones so they try to abuse of
this
opportunity to attack to travellers. It can really have a negative report for other tourists and may reduce the rate of visitors. In principle new places suffer from lack of welfare facilities, therefor, spending time in those areas is a little hard. Individuals should prepare everything during the holidays
such
as cooking their own food by traditional ways on fire or should sleep in a sleeping
bags
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bag
or even in some special area they should travel by horses, camels or elephants which are a little unusual but interesting. At the conclusion, in my front of view, humans are really selfish and want to discover everything and use them in bad ways, while the earth and Environment is not just for them,
next generation
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the next generation
and even other creature have to use them too.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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