Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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It is believed by some people that the key to happiness is having a lot of funds.
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what are the other non-monetary ways that can make people blissful. It is true that money makes life more convenient and enjoyable. One can buy their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
car, go on a vacation to Hawai and have dinner in a five-star restaurant with their family.
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Travelling
, and buying luxurious cars, expensive clothes are
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proven
proving
to make happy. Who would not like driving a Mercedes and visiting a different country every month? I still remember the road trip to
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change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
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when my friend returned from the USA and he
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sponsored our stay at the TAJ hotel which is a luxurious seven-star hotel. Money can definitely buy things that can make people blissful and content. It is truly said that Happiness is a state of mind. There are innumerable other non-monetary ways that have made people happy. Whether it is playing basketball or performing a mono act on stage, pursuing hobbies is proved to make people joyful. Some people,
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as Doctors, social workers,
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, feel happy when they are able to help other people. Others like to spend their weekends playing with their pet without getting bored. There are monks who say that they can feel content by just sitting on a rock and meditating. To recapitulate, it is a fact that money can buy happiness, but having said that, there are other non-monetary ways as well which can make people happy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial security
  • Basic needs
  • Comfort
  • Luxury
  • Freedom
  • Altruistic
  • Philanthropy
  • Nurturing relationships
  • Fulfillment
  • Sense of accomplishment
  • Physical well-being
  • Spiritual beliefs
  • Community involvement
  • Gratitude
  • Mindfulness
  • Simple pleasures
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