'There should be no legal age for drinking.' Discuss this statement giving reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Currently there is a legal
age
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for drinking of
alchohol
a liquor or brew containing alcohol as the active agent
alcohol
in many countries,
for
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example you
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example, you
have to be 18 years in The Netherlands and 21 year in the United States of America.
This
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minimum
age
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for the
consumption
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of
alcohol
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is made on for a reason.
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Therefore I
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Therefore, I
am against the plan of no legal
age
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for the
consumption
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of
alcohol
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. Drinking
alcohol
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is causing many problems all over the world. People are getting addicted to the
alcohol
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, they are alcoholic, which in turn can lead to
violence
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towards other people. Many stories of domestic
violence
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is caused by an alcoholic person within the family, or fights in the bars late at night, when they have been drinking all evening. Having the
consumption
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of
alcohol
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starting from a minimum
age
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, the problem with alcoholics can be pressed down. As the consumers reach the minimum
age
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they are old enough and have more knowledge about what
it
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it, alcohol
alcohol
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is doing to your body and
brain
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. Not only is
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consumption
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the consumption
of
alcohol
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causing
violence
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towards other people, it has
also
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great effects of the development of the
brain
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of the consumer. The
brain
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is not fully developed until you are in your mid-twenties. When there is no legal
age
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to consume
alcohol
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, children might start drinking it
on
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at
a very young
age
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which can cause underdevelopment in the
brain
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. The underdevelopment of the
brain
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might have many consequences, from learning disabilities
too
in the direction of
to
diseases
too
in the direction of
to
health problems. The legal
age
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for drinking should be maintained. When there is no legal
age
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for the
consumption
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of
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alcohol there
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alcohol, there
might be more
violence
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towards other people.
Also
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the minimum
age
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of drinking helps
agains
in contact with
against
underdevelopment
off
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of
the
brain
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, preventing diseases and health problems.

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