'There should be no legal age for drinking.' Discuss this statement giving reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Currently there is a legal

age

for drinking of

alchohol

a liquor or brew containing alcohol as the active agent

alcohol

in many countries,

for

example you

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example, you

have to be 18 years in The Netherlands and 21 year in the United States of America.

This

minimum

age

for the

consumption

of

alcohol

is made on for a reason.

Therefore I

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Therefore, I

am against the plan of no legal

age

for the

consumption

of

alcohol

. Drinking

alcohol

is causing many problems all over the world. People are getting addicted to the

alcohol

, they are alcoholic, which in turn can lead to

violence

towards other people. Many stories of domestic

violence

is caused by an alcoholic person within the family, or fights in the bars late at night, when they have been drinking all evening. Having the

consumption

of

alcohol

starting from a minimum

age

, the problem with alcoholics can be pressed down. As the consumers reach the minimum

age

they are old enough and have more knowledge about what

it

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it, alcohol

alcohol

is doing to your body and

brain

. Not only is

consumption

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the consumption

of

alcohol

causing

violence

towards other people, it has

also

great effects of the development of the

brain

of the consumer. The

brain

is not fully developed until you are in your mid-twenties. When there is no legal

age

to consume

alcohol

, children might start drinking it

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at

a very young

age

which can cause underdevelopment in the

brain

. The underdevelopment of the

brain

might have many consequences, from learning disabilities

too

in the direction of

to

diseases

too

in the direction of

to

health problems. The legal

age

for drinking should be maintained. When there is no legal

age

for the

consumption

of

alcohol there

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alcohol, there

might be more

violence

towards other people.

Also

the minimum

age

of drinking helps

agains

in contact with

against

underdevelopment

off

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of

the

brain

, preventing diseases and health problems.