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You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in the city. Write a letter to your friend:, 1.Explain what you like to do. 2.Tell him/her what type of work or studies you had completed. 3.Ask for assistance in connecting an appropriate institution

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Dear
susan
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Susan
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, It's been ages since we communicated, I hope you are doing well. Actually, I have planned to pursue my masters in
Business
 administration in your city, Ontario, with the aim of experiencing new pedagogic techniques with which colleges in
canada
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Canada
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 produce potential personnel and exploration
of
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apply
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new
business
 opportunities. As far as my previous qualification is concerned, I am graduated in global
business
 management, a
four year
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 course, from st. Paul
business
 school, and have been an apprentice for six months in domestic share market, Nifty. Given the acquaintance you possess about
this
 city, I would really appreciate your efforts to find a prestigious and suitable college taking my requirement into consideration.
This
 apart, I love to have a residential institute with
hope
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 of avoiding unnecessary travelling and cost. Looking forward
a
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swift reply and thanking you for your kind help. With love, Mani
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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