The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

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this

high level of competency between nations to

use

nuclear

energies

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has become A controversial debate

due to

the fact that it can lead to a nuclear war and may destroy billions of People in the blink of an eye. In my opinion, I totally agree that we should alternate our path to the world Without nuclear

energies

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and

use

other sources of

energy

.

To begin

with, even though there is some benefit to using nuclear

energies

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,

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some countries could

use

It for harsh subjects like war. In

this

case, some countries may

use

this

technology to achieve their desired goals

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harming other human beings and

this

is something we should stand against it. For instance, North Korea has 150 nuclear missiles and they were threatening other nations especially their close Neighbor South Korea with it,

furthermore

, they do not

use

this

modern technology for a clean way to produce

energy

. So, we should consider the purposes of using nuclear

energy

to prevent hostilities.

Firstly

, there are other types of producing

energy

that

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more sustainable, safer and more peaceful in Comparison

of

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nuclear

energy

.

Secondly

, the malfunction of a nuclear plant is a crucial part of nuclear disaster and for that reason, I am not optimistic about using nuclear

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energy

.

Finally

, we Have seen that a nuclear disaster

for example

what happened in Chernobyl or Fukushima could cause so many difficulties for mankind. In conclusion, there is no doubt that using nuclear

energy

could be harmful

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world peace and it can Cause brutal wars. I think we should consider other types of producing

energy

which

they

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are much safer and more peaceful to

use

.