The internet has made knowledge immediately available through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of the knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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the past few years have seen a dramatic increase in the usage of technological gadgets. Individuals are being gotten knowledge about various issues
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electronic equipment that converts sound into electrical signals that can be transmitted over distances and then converts received signals back into sounds
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, it is beneficial for them at the time of travelling as they came to know about each and every part of the earth with the help of
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technology. Another pivotal aspect of
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as they get each and every lesson related to their study on
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the internet
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direction, but the most striking is that masses started using
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knowledge in an illegal manner. To illustrate
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cyber crime
crime committed using a computer and the internet to steal a person's identity or sell contraband or stalk victims or disrupt operations with malevolent programs
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persons
who victims of it are going to
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suicide. Apart from it, sometimes due to getting some fake or wrong news from the
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, its potential drawbacks never be overlooked either. So, it is the responsibility of the government to aware people through seminars that the must use electronic gadgets in an appropriate way.
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