Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is assumed that learning
foreign language
Suggestion
a foreign language
at primary school is optimum for children than at secondary school.I believe that it has more benefits than drawbacks. The disadvantage of
this
is that, in childhood every child wants to spend their time by playing games in ground, eating sweets.
Also
, children should know a lot of things.
For example
:
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:
communication with people, eating habits. Despite
this
there are significant advantages that it can bring to children's lives.
Firstly
, studying
,
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,
learning improves memory and brain's function.
Secondly
, when children will grow up
,
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,
they should work and make money.
For example
:
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:
ambassador, they deal between countries to avoid problems,
that is
why they should know a lot of languages
,
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,
it plays
vital role
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a vital role
in
country's growth
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the country's growth
.
In addition
to
this
, now everyone in
this
world is talented and have enough ability to show their potential, so beginning with childhood, children should try hard to become
right person
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the right person
. I would
therefore
argue that
although
there are disadvantages of the learning foreign language at primary school, but they are outweighed by
advantages
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the advantages
.

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