1. Global warming is now generally agreed to be a very serious problem. What are the causes of global warming and what should governments do to reduce it.

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Ever since we realized the power to harness mother nature, we have started using it to
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an extent to make our life comfortable.
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However we
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However, we
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began to
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it in
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a way that it is catastrophic to humankind. Global warming and environmental degradation
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are
a serious threat to nature. In the following essay, I shall discuss about the possible effects and strategies to be implemented by the government to overcome it. To start with, there are several reasons that deter global warming.
Firstly
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, Population explosion in major cities results in
over
exploitation to the point of diminishing returns
overuse
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of renewable and non renewable source of energy and cause pollution, perhaps cause health threats to human and animals.
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, exploitation of soil.
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, Punjab is known as
rice capital
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the rice capital
of
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
for the past 2 decades, but currently it has lost its importance due to excessive farming.
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Therefore these
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Therefore, these
factors have a profound impact on the
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
effect On a contrary, there
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
measures which can be considered to overcome the aforesaid causes.
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with
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Government
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The government
should impose restrictions on people migrating to urban cities,
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promote to
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pubic
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
transport and electric vehicles. To add on, Individuals and government and other communities should oppose the act to urbanizing country side
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a
restrict over
use
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of
farm lands
a rural area where farming is practiced
farmlands
and fishing.
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would help the land to regain its significance. To recapitulate, despite the fact most of the
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nation
are facing
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is facing
a serious threat due to global warming. If every government
adhere
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adheres
their obligations. We can still alleviate the problems and serve a better society for future.
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