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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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It is undeniable that the production of rubbish has risen recently. I believe that one of the most crucial factors that plays an important role in
this
increase
 is overpopulation.
This
 essay will discuss why is
this
 happen and will explain some ways to reduce it.
To begin
 with, overpopulation has led to significant dangers on environment that its effects can be shown on many well-beings on earth. The reason behind
this
 is that as the number of people
increase
Suggestion
increases
, their amounts of producing garbage will
also
increase
.
For instance
, officials in China, announced that the country would be in a severe danger if no roles had taken into consideration to overcome
this
raise
any competition
race
 and
thus
 many species would be under a fatal risk.
However
, governments should raise the awareness among their people and factories concerning the side effects of the tremendous amounts produced by garbage. The reason behind
this
 is that many people do not know the consequences which might be resulted because of
such
 amounts.
In other words
, many factories all around the globe still dump their sewage and non bio-degradable wastes
such
 as plastic into the seas, which can have a negative impact on the creatures of these seas. To illustrate, a documentary on National Geographic showed how a turtle was suffering to death due to the large amounts of plastic ropes which had surrounded her body without any presence of anyone to help her. In conclusion, as overpopulation is often leading to the
increase
 of garbage, governments should make extra efforts to raise up risks that can be resulted.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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