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Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #technology
Technology today have offered
wast variety
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a vast variety
vast variety
worst variety
what variety
 of communication methods. People can
globaly
throughout the world
globally
 connect from anywhere around the globe.
Therefore
 the opportunity to become
social
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more social
 in today’s lives is easy. Since with the advance
technology there
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technology, there
 are
plethora
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a plethora
 of windows and mobile applications
such
 as
facebook
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Facebook
,
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,
instagram
,
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,
skpe
bypass
skip
scope
,
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,
twitter etc. . By having these social media platforms we can get connected to our friends and family.
However there
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However, there
 are many
drawback
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drawbacks
toward
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to
 it
also
. Because the technology is more developed
virtualy
in essence or effect but not in fact
virtually
 most into our mobile phones
,
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,
 laptops etc.
Hence these
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Hence, these
 are virtual method to become social.
Therefore it’s
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Therefore, it’s
 not
lot
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a lot
 more
of
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about
 actual ways of connecting. Since todays social
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
 have made a competition
amoung
in the middle of
among
 everybody it is less like to be
socialize
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socialized
 on these platforms. Connecting our friends and family the old fashioned way gives us the sense of real feeling. Since the action and reality
makes
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make
huge difference
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a huge difference
 comparing for virtual communication. Since people now a days more distracted
with
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by
 their phones
their
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they're
 less likely to be
social
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socially
 even if there is to associate.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online marketplaces
  • mobile payment options
  • personalized advertising
  • accessibility
  • compare prices
  • decision fatigue
  • impulse buying
  • financial imprudence
  • privacy and data security
  • transformed
  • streamlined
  • user-friendly
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