It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal

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in the debate of whether media

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a key

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to increase a

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of or relating to or characteristic of or appropriate for children or young people

juvenile

crimes

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crime

or not.

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personally belive

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personally, believe

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personally believes

that the mass media

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play

a

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of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis

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in the mental growth of any person. In

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am going to discuss some reasons and solutions to

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bring to an end; settle conclusively

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problem. Let's begin with the

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of media in a person's life. Social media has a huge impact on a person. What

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mean is that, if a child is following to his/ her

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model

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, so he/she

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like to be same as his

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, whether the

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is in a negative or positive side in the movie.

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,

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games

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are also played

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have also played

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play as important

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as a movie star. There are lots of

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video

game in the market, which are full of violence. Recent studies showed that 30 percent of

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of or relating to or characteristic of or appropriate for children or young people

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juveniles

crime increases because of violent

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games. People prefer to buy same weapons in their real life as they see in the

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games. There are some possible

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solutions to stop

the rising number of crimes committed by

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of or relating to or characteristic of or appropriate for children or young people

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First

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and the most important, parents should keep an eye on their kids about the selection of their

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games and the

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model

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whom they are

followong

about to be mentioned or specified

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flown

flowing

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to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

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. Giving a good education about the consequences of their actions is

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important. Apart from

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, there should be an age restriction when purchasing a

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game on online or at physical stores. Take American people as an example, the ratio of crimes committed by

juviniles

of or relating to or characteristic of or appropriate for children or young people

juveniles

juvenile

has been decreased to 10 percent from 30 percent today and made feasible with

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the help

of parents. In conclusions,

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the media

is one of the most contributing

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factors

of

juvinile

of or relating to or characteristic of or appropriate for children or young people

juvenile

crime, but it can be overcome by identifying the reasons behind

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issues

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issue

with the

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the activity of contributing to the fulfillment of a need or furtherance of an effort or purpose

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existence

of parents and law enforcements.