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All fathers should be entitled to time-off from work when their children are born. What is your opinion?

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Many companies now allow fathers to take a few days or weeks off from
work
 after the birth of their child. In my opinion,
this
 is a meaningful idea. In the following paragraphs I will explain why I think so. Just like the mother, the father may
also
 experience a lot of stress and tension in the days prior to and immediately after the birth of their child. The paternity leave makes it easy for them to cope with
this
 situation. If the husband is working at
office
Suggestion
the office
 when his wife is in labour, he is going to experience a great deal of stress.
As a result
, his concentration on his
work
 will reduce affecting quality. His inability to support his wife during the
delivery
 of their
baby
 is another cause of stress. Because of
this
 reason, in many countries now fathers are
also
 allowed days off from
work
 after the birth of their
baby
.
This
 short leave entitlement will not only enable the fathers to be with wives during the
delivery
 but
also
 provide
work
-life balance so that the quality of
work
 is not compromised. The
second
 reason for allowing paternity leave is that husbands can help their wives to take care of the
baby
. Childbirth can be excruciatingly painful for the woman and she desperately needs someone to help her in the days immediately after the
delivery
. A husband can be of immense help to a woman if he is around her and her
baby
 in the days immediately after
delivery
. After closely
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 the subject, it can be concluded that all fathers should be entitled to paternity leave.
This
 will not only make childbirth less stressful for
them but
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them, but
also
 enable them to offer crucial support to their wives during
this
 important period of life.
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