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Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the Internet or books. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#think #information #advice #people #internet #books
Althought
Suggestion
Although
 few people believe that getting guidance or data about anything from a human is reliable others argue that collecting knowledge and getting tip through
internet
 and books comparatively easier for any individual. I do utterly believe that even though getting info is might easier on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 but in terms of help any individual would be considered as a better option. To commence with
first statement
Suggestion
the first statement
, it is particularly an easier option for any individual to get consultation for free and trustworthy from family, friends and relatives. It is undeniable that in our bad situation we always find our friends and family members in our side whom try to support alongside building our confidence. So people who say that to get
clue
Suggestion
clues
 and suggestion from somebody is a good idea they are right from their point of view.
On the other hand
, if someone trying to gather some information about international study related or could be a mathematical solution than that time
internet
 will be far more better than a
person
. Though people can get any kind of info from friends and family member, but they could not rely on that by closing their eyes same applied about
internet
Suggestion
the internet
. So I think that if anyone really wants any information or knowledge about any particular matter than that
person
 should go to an expert so having a better solution comparatively others are freely distributed in the surrounding. To conclude, I am keen to say that it depends on
person
 to
person
 that from where they want to take the information or advice which they are going to use for their work or resolving any issue.

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