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Some people say that ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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Today, a fair amount of people believes that traditional
newspaper
 and magazines will overtaken by the modern technologies. I totally disagree with
this
 phenomenon. As per my opinion
newspaper
 and magazines are the cheapest mode to get news. To embark, on
this
 why magazines and
newspaper
 is still demanding in our society, there are several reasons behind it. Most of the people from rich and middle background prefer to read
newspaper
 early in the morning while having a cup of tea or coffee.
Moreover
,
newspaper
 and magazines are considered to be as the cheapest way to get news. In our society we can get
newspaper
 and magazines locally at the rate of 3 rupees only.
For example
: according to the Hindustan times report it is found that 75 percent of people in India prefer to read newspapers rather than watching news on the latest technologies.
However
, people are changing their taste by switching rapidly towards modern technology to get the latest news updates by various modes like television, mobile phones, YouTube and so on.
Moreover
, modern technology changes the approach of reading news while sitting at home or office by doing one click on their device.
For example
: videos provide a full brief view regarding news and it can be interpreted in an appropriate manner. To conclude, the modern technology have it's own benefits and it affect people lives too in many ways. In my opinion people will still prefer to read
newspaper
Suggestion
newspapers
the newspaper
a newspaper
 and magazines as per its popularity in Indian society.
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