Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.

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Some people argue that in modern
society
, technological advancements are increasing the
gap
between the wealthy and the poor while others believe that
technology
is decreasing the
gap
between them. In my opinion, certain technologies are available to all people in
society
and help reduce the
gap
between the rich and the poor.
However
, certain innovations are inaccessible to the poor because of their high cost. Certain inventions and discoveries decreased the
gap
between people of different income levels.
This
is because they are accessible to all people due to their availability at cheaper rates.
For example
, internet
technology
is available to almost all sections of
society
. It is affordable to all people and certain places
such
as railway stations, bus stations and airports are WiFi hotspots where the internet is freely available. Online shopping facilities, e-learning opportunities, and social networking sites are available to both affluent and poor people in the
society
and they decrease the
gap
between the rich and the poor.
However
, certain advancements in
technology
are not affordable for the poorer sections of
society
. Modern medicine,
for example
, is expensive. Certain new drugs and diagnostic procedures are very costly. Certain affluent people who developed cancer took treatment with a special kind of
protein which
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protein, which
was very
expensive but
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expensive, but
had fewer side effects compared to conventional chemotherapy. Rich people can access these treatments by spending only a small portion of their income and improve their health. Poor people,
on the other hand
, have to spend all of their money on conventional treatments and yet there is no guarantee that the condition will improve. In conclusion, certain innovations in
technology
decrease the
gap
between the rich and the poor while certain developments make
society
more polarized. It is hoped that in the near future all technologies will be available to all people regardless of their economic status.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contribute
  • welfare
  • public services
  • progressive taxation
  • distribution of wealth
  • civic duty
  • social cohesion
  • tax evasion
  • economic disparities
  • social unrest
  • individual rights
  • societal responsibilities
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