You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Thomas,
I am writing disappointment letter for furniture in your apartment.
I am Sara the tenant of your flat recently I shifted here. When I was shifting here I saw some
wood work
is needed. Correct your spelling
woodwork
Besides
this
, the couch of Correct article usage
the dinning
dinning
room is ruptured from different sides. The leather of the sofa is Correct your spelling
dining
also
torn from inside
and the cotton is coming out. Correct article usage
the inside
Although
, the noise is Correct word choice
However
being com
from bed and we cannot sleep well at night. Verb problem
coming
Furthermore
, the door locks are missed
in the wardrobes and some are not locked Wrong verb form
missing
due to
bad condition. There are only cupboards in the kitchen area and it's not enough for us. The main entrance of the room is not pushed
the lock properly and it Change the verb form
has not pushed
rquires
to be changed.
I would suggest you Correct your spelling
requires
to
please fix these problems Verb problem
apply
from
the carpenter so that your furniture Change preposition
with
could
remainWrong verb form
can
a
better condition. If you cannot do Change preposition
in a
this
so
allow me Rephrase
apply
that
I could manage myself and after that I will share Change preposition
to
you
the cost Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
give me money
.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,Correct article usage
the money
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logical structure
Address each bullet point in a separate paragraph to enhance structure clarity.
greeting and closing
Use appropriate formal endings to your letter to match the context of writing to a landlord.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph captures a singular idea or issue, providing clearer argumentation and structure.
complete response
Make sure to fully address the task by not only explaining the issues but also clearly stating your expectations for a resolution.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a consistently formal and polite tone throughout, suitable for correspondence with a landlord.