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Write a comparison on a consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

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The given table shows the amount of the consuming
expenditure
for
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in
 five countries; Ireland
,
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,
Italy
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Spain
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,
Sweden, and Turkey in 2002.
This
expenditure
 is divided
by
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in
 three different categories; food and drink, clothing and footwear, and leisure and education
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 According to the table
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 Turkey has the highest
percentage
 of the
expenditure
 (32.14%) for the food and drink
category
, followed by, Ireland with
percentage
 28.91%.
On the other hand
, Sweden and Italy come with the lowest costs
percentage
 for
this
category
 by only 16.36 and 15.27 percentages.
In addition
 to
this
,
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,
 for the clothing and footwear
category
, Italy comes
at
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in
 the
first
 place with the highest
percentage
 of cost 6.63
,
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,
 followed by Turkey with a very
percentage
 6.34.
Then
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,
 Ireland
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 Spain and Sweden come with a very close percentages 9.00 , 6.51
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,
and 5 40. For the
third
category
, leisure and education, the percentages of the
expenditure
 for the fifth countries are very convergent.
However
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,
Turkey
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again, comes with the highest
percentage
 of costs 4.35
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followedby
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followed by
, Italy
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Ireland
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and Spain with percentages 4.35,3.22, 1.45

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