Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree? Own example?

In
this
contemporary era, a small screen is the best source of in-house entertainment.
However
, a group of individual have been predominated and becoming lethargic, by which socialism has been vanished in the society. While, I completely agree with
this
given notion and my supportive ideas will be given below in
this
essay.
Although
, humankind has industrious schedule and stress in their everyday’s life, to unload their pressure TV is far better than other physical activities.
Such
as an individual commute to the office, school or college in day time and after reaching at home, require some time to relax the mind, which can be possible by watching Television,
this
is a perpetual activity, by which humans are becoming lazy.
Moreover
, because, watching a small screen is a passive activity, that people enjoy by sitting glued to it and become work-shy.
On the other hand
, not merely TV has made people lazy, but
also
a reason of vanishing socialism. There are a lot of daily soup and interesting series, weather is of historical or an admirable person’s lifestyle has been eagerly, seeing by youth, by which people are not interested to talk to the immediate person as well.
For instance
, at a home of 4 family members can be seen busy in watching TV in their separate room and will not talk to the family member sitting in the
next
door room. In my personal experience,
this
is what I face issues at my home when my children don’t talk to each other and be busy in watching television. To make a long story short, I down my pen and encapsulating that, If television had not been there, people would not be able to pass their leisure time.
However
, excess use of it can be harmful for an individual as well as society, wherein mankinds become lethargic and antisocial.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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