The graph below shows how people in USA spent their free time between 1980 and 2010

The following line graph provides information about how American people used to spend their
time
from 1980 year to 2010 year. Overall, at the beginning of the 1980 watching TV accounted about 60% of the most practiced activities, while surfing the internet was the lowest
activity
practiced.
F
irstly both
Accept comma addition
Firstly, both
Surfing the internet and Reading w
ere practiced
Suggestion
was practiced
from 0% of the American population,
this
situation changed from 1990 to 2010year, where they had a r
apidly
Suggestion
rapid
increase, a similar situation occurred with hiking, in fact, at the beginning of the period just 20% of the population spent their
time
on
this
activity
, while after about 30 years it became the most popular one. In the far 1980 the majority of Americans used to spend their
time
watching TV, but afterwards
this
practice had a slow decrease,
nevertheless
it still remained the
second
most common
activity
practiced nowadays. In
this
century we can claim that the most practiced activities
fromthe
Suggestion
of the
from the
American
populationn
the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
in their spare
time
are hiking, watching TV, reading and surfing the internet, while the less practiced
activity
is going to the theatre
Submitted by marti47.mn on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

What to do next:
Look at other essays: