Some people say international sports events help in world peace. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Today's world is reeling under the effects of hate crimes and cross-country
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terrorized
terrorism
. It is often believed that events
such
as
intercountry
sports meet will help to propagate the message of peace and brotherhood in the world. I completely agree with
this
view and in the course of my essay, will shed some light on the reasons which have shaped my opinion. Any sport, if played in the right
spirit
, has several advantages for the society.
Firstly
, it helps to instill the
spirit
of nationalism in each human being. Both the players and spectators get emotionally stirred by a feeling of pride
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of
in
to
one's own country. Playing of the respective national anthems before any
intercountry
sporting event is an example to prove
this
point.
Secondly
, we cannot refute the fact that it gives immense joy when the
spirit
of the game overcomes the petty barriers of countries and cultures because national teams often have players from different ethnicities and backgrounds.
This
helps to spread the message of oneness and unity in diversity.
Last
but not the least, international sports meet help to ease tension between warring countries as sports often serves as a binding factor between them. To illustrate, passion for a cricket is a common trend which binds the
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neighbouring
neighboring
countries India and Pakistan. International one day games and test matches show us that the players of both countries are quite friendly and amicable off the field.
This
helps to spread the feeling of brotherhood of mutual admiration. It is not unusual to see the players congratulating each other or laughing at a joke.
This
teaches us to respect each individual for his virtues, regardless of the
intercountry
political disputes.
Thus
, these sports
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meet
meets
between different countries show us that the human
spirit
and regard for humanity is above political issues and tensions. In conclusion, I completely agree with the opinion that Sports played at International level helps in easing tensions between countries and helps to spread the message of tolerance, peace, and brotherhood.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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