The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six area of the world.

The charts indicate 25
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places
place
on the
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earth, taking
earth taking
about
water
and the way of using it. Sin obvious all of pie
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charts
chart
have
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got the lowest
the got the lowest
percentage
in the domestic uses like at home.
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However
however
the largest
percentage
went
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to
with
the
agriculture
and farms.
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The
the
centre of Asia has the greatest number of
percentage
of
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agricultural
agriculture
use
.
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On
on
the other
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hand, in
hand in
Europe they did not
use
water
so much as Central Asia or Africa. They just
use
34.4
percentage
what in the industrial they
use
eat a lot and the largest
percentage
with them.
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If
if
you check on Africa it's in the almost II after Asia
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uses
use
water
in industrial and opposite of Europe. In North America and Europe slightly same in industrial
use
and just list for
percentage
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in
to
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Europe, South Asia
Europe South Asia
and South America are
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using
uses
the
water
in
agriculture
rather than industrial.
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Overall, they
Overall they
overall they
all
use
water
much in the farmer and
agriculture
Europe and North
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America, they
America they
use
water
more than
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
other
in the industrial areas. Africa got the lowest
percentage
in domestic and industrial uses.

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