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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six area of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six area of the world.
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The charts indicate 25
place
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places
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 on the earth
taking
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talking
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 about
water
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 and the way of using it. Sin
obvious
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obviously
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 all of
pie
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the pie
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chart
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charts
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 have the got the lowest
percentage
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in
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for
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the
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apply
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domestic uses like at home.
however
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 the largest
percentage
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 went with
the
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apply
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agriculture
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 and farms.the centre of
Asia
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 has the greatest
number of
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apply
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percentage
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 of
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agriculture
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agricultural
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use
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.
on the other hand
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 in
Europe
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 they did not
use
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water
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 so much as
Central
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in Central
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Asia
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 or Africa. They just
use
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 34.4
percentage
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 what in the
industrial
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industry
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 they
use
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eat
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to eat
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 a lot and the largest
percentage
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 with them.if you check on Africa it's
in
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apply
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the
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apply
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almost II after
Asia
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use
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uses
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water
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 in industrial and opposite of
Europe
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. In North America and
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Europe
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,Europe
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 slightly
same
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the same
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 in industrial
use
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 and just list for
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percentage
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a percentage
the percentage
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 to
Europe
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 South
Asia
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 and South America
are uses
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are using
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 the
water
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 in
agriculture
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 rather than industrial.
overall
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 they all
use
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water
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 much in the farmer and
agriculture
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Europe
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 and North America
they
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apply
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use
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water
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 more than
other
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others
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 in the industrial areas. Africa got the lowest
percentage
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 in domestic and industrial uses.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, percentage, agriculture, asia, use, europe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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