Some people believe that it is better to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try to improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some that acceptance of a bad
situation
like unhappy work environment and lack of money is their only choice in life while some would argue that there's a room for improvement in every
situation
. In my opinion, I agree with the later that there's a better way to make everything better. Some people feel that the only way is to accept a bad
situation
. I think they have reasons why they don't want to change the
situation
.
For example
, too much rejection after trying to apply for their dream work or lack of appreciation of their abilities. For these reasons, they choose to remain on what they have rather than look for another way to improve their living. They don't have a choice to explore more as they are afraid of the possibilities of failure.
On the other hand
, it is considered by some that you need to try and look for different ways to improve the
situation
.
For example
, after many rejections in searching for a job, they will not stop until they find one because they believe in their ability and capacity. These kind of people has a positive view in life and have faith that if others can, they
also
can.
Moreover
, motivation is very important for us to aim for more and to strive hard for our dream. In conclusion,
although
acceptance of a bad
situation
is our
last
choice, we still need to believe in ourselves and show the world that we have our unique abilities and capacities that will help in improving the
situation
.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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