Now a days artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. 1) Why is this happening 2) Is this positive or negative development.

These days, cars are
been
the state or fact of existing
being
driven by artificial intelligence.
This
is mainly because of artificial intelligence for advancement in technology and
on the other hand
it should be considered as a negative development because if might increase the rate of unemployment.
Currently companies
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Currently, companies
are developing artificial intelligence on a large scale, Because they want to bring A.I technology in our lives and for
this
purpose they are working on A.I to drive cars. Some real examples like Tesla and BMW both companies have tested many cars that have A.I driver installed in them and selling for public use. There could be an increase in the unemployment rate by the use of A.I drivers
.
Accept space
.
because
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Because
large number
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a large number
of people are doing work as a driver
world wide
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
and their job can be over with the use of
this
technology.

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