Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Artists are the
representors
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representations
represents
representatives
representative
representation
of a
country
's culture and views. That's why the Government
give
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gives
a lot of support to them.  There is no guarantee that if an artist is presenting or performing that's representing the
country
, will actually provide any
monetory
relating to or involving money
monetary
benefit to him or not. The purpose of the presentation or performance is to portray the
country
's culture and environment in
such
a way that it will attract others to visit or invest in the
country
, so that the company can prosper by the foreign exchange flowing in the company by these resources.
Hence to
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Hence, to
keep the artists motivated and focused towards the performing arts
instead
of anything else, the Government provides them support so that all their other needs get fulfilled. Contradicting to the views, there are those who believe that
this
is a waste of money and if utilised elsewhere can reap
alot
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a lot
of benefits to the
country
. These people include NGOs, humanitarians, economic critics, infrastructure critics, etc. These people believe that if the money spent on artists is utilized for the health, welfare and safety of people,
developement
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
of infrastructure, it will help develop the
country
and will economic stability in the
country
. Both of the views are correct in their own ways. But we need to understand that both aspects are important for the
country
. The Government has allocated funds separately for both agendas. Artists portray the
country
's culture in ways that attract tourists and investors,
hence
its very necessary that their activities be supported by the government but other aspects should
also
be given equal importance to keep balance in the development of
country
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the country
a country
.

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