some people say that main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more and more important environmental problems. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

it
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It
is argued by certain individuals that plants and animals are losing in our time, it has become environmental issue, whereas it is
thougth
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
by others that
environment
problems are
also
awful for human beings
therefore
it is spoiling people's life.
this
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This
essay will examine about the loss of particular species and
environment
obstacles.
To begin
with, one of the primary
reason
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reasons
is that flora and fauna are becoming extinct due to deforestation. Individuals do not have
accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodations
for
living
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a living
, so they are more cutting trees, and they are constructing their house in every open space now. Animals
also
confront ample obstacles in their life
,
Accept space
,
since they live in
forest
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the forest
forests
and people are spoiling to forest for spending their life
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
animals move to urban
areas and
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areas, and
they do have space for living due to traffic
then
they become
victim
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a victim
of living of dying by people. On the other side,
environment
issues are repulsive concerns for mankind due to
traffic problem
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traffic problems
the traffic problem
in these days, people are using own private vehicles, which produce explosive fog
then
they face some problems when they inhale oxygen.
sometimes
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Sometimes
, they become
victim
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victims
a victim
of some ailments like asthma, cancer and skin problem,
etcetra
by using vehicles. Factories, and rice mills
also
produce bad
air which
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air, which
is awful for them. To conclude, undoubtedly, plants, animals and
environment
issue are prominent for mankinds.
therefore with
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Therefore, with
Therefore with
the assistance of these
thngs
any movable possession (especially articles of clothing)
things
many problems can be tackled in diverse ways.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • habitat
  • extinction
  • climate change
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • global warming
  • sustainable
  • conservation
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