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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

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These days, if we look accurately into some details about different languages, we would face
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 fact that many languages, which are means of communication, particularly through local people, are going to fade.
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 some people believed that it is not a big deal, it should be considered as a big problem. In
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 essay, I am going to reveal some of the perspectives on
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 controversial issue. On the
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 hand, every single nation has its culture, and they usually have a specific
language
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 of it,
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 they could use it as a means of communication, and somehow they could pass the torch to their pure culture to the from their anecdotes to their following generations.
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, the specific
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 of every nation is something that could make the bond between them stronger and would keep them united.
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, some others believed that it does not care if various languages die
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 after another. They might think that the more the years pass, the more we go through globalization, and the more we need to care less about different tongues. They are believed that just
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language
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 is enough to communicate, and if all people learn to talk in that specific
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, it would be enough.
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, these days learning the English
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 is widespread all over the world, and
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 motion has brought
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 attention to some people, that for the whole world, dominance in
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language
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 is pretty enough. Overall, I do not support
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 idea, that believes in destroying other languages in case of reaching for an easier life. Every single
language
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 which is going to die needs to be survived, and it demands support and collaboration of people, who their parents and grandparents talk those tongues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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