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Nowdays children have too much freedom. Some people think it may be dangerous in some aspects. Do you agree or disagree?

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Everyone, wants
freedom itis
Accept comma addition
freedom, it is
freedom it is
 generally believed that parents or teacher should not give
freedom
 to children. In my opinion the childhood
life
 is very important children ought to not give
freedom
. In
this
 essay I fully agree with
this
 essay
to
Suggestion
To
 begin with, general view when under teen age have
freedom
, it could be very harmful children are very curious. If we give
freedom
, children will follow wrong pattern.
For instance
, I saw a many children who smoke in teenage
life
. Meanwhile, they use abusive language with elders, even they misbehave with people even they have
also
 fought with adult youth.
on
Suggestion
On
 the other hand, children do nothing in their
life
 they do not take any interest in studies
however
 that tells a lie with people, teacher and
also
 a parents it might be they attract with drugs, 
for example
, my personal view, my cousin who now a fourteen year old he does not study, just cause is his father gives flexibility,
however
 he does smocks,
also
 he kicked around the street. In conclusion, these situations just could have handled by parents and teacher
otherwise
 no one could save their
life
.

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