Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefits teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is an opinion of a part of the
educationalists
that international exchange visits will improve the teenagers'
life
at school. In my opinion, the advantages could be more than the disadvantages not only for the students, but
also
for their families and classmates because it is an opportunity to grow up in many fields of
life
. A teenager that decides to go abroad to study for a period has to deal with many challenges.
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However, I
However I
think that it could be seen has a gym for the real
life
. Facing with a different culture, changing his/her habits, relating to people are all things that will improve the ability of the student to be more patient, to listen more what people have to say and of course to grow up with wider horizons in his mind.
On the other hand
, for the family
that is
going to give him a shelter, there are
also
many questions to deal with. But, as I am firmly convicted, it is an occasion to improve their communication skills and to be more open minded. I
also
think that having an exchange student in a classroom should be an add value to the relationships that are going to bear. To see someone that decided to leave his country and his family, and to see that he is not afraid could help the other students to take into consideration
such
an option that could be significant for their future.
Therefore
, it is impossible not to say that some disadvantages exist, at the end the student could be homesick, he could run out of money without the control of his parents, and maybe he will not like the new place. Anyway, these are problems that can be solved, and being able solving problems always means to grow up an to learn. In
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conclusion, I
conclusion I
conclusion i
think that advantages coming from an experience of that kind could help the teenager relating with other people and other culture, but
also
to learn
life
the branch of mechanics concerned with the forces that cause motions of bodies
dynamics
dynamic
dinamics
and to understand the world and its rules.

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