Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Some of the people argue that people are educated mostly with facts in their all school
life
and school administrators
dont
do not
don't
spar
e time for practical skills for them.I certainly agree with them
this
is because lacking of
quality
teachers and materials .
Th
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.
en
people always
struggle
to get practical skills in their
business
life
.In
this
essay ı will support my view with valid arguments and exapm
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
examples
les.
To begin
with, schools generally spent their time on theor
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
theatrical
ical skil
ls in all stages.Because for practical educa
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
ion and
experiments high
quality
teachers are necce
absolutely essential
necessary
sary.Unfo
u
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Unfortunately, schools
Unfortunately schools
rtunately schools
dont
do not
don't
have
these
quality
teachers.Thats
why they
generally obligate students to learn just facts.For examples mechanical engin
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engineer
eers stud
ent should be informed about engines and they have to examine all parts of these engines.But unfou
by bad luck
unfortunately
rtunately they
can not find any engines in their schools.Because schoo
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school
school's
ls adm
inistrators
dont
do not
don't
allo
cate any budget to get these engines.Even when we assumed that they have engin
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engines, they
es they
dont
do not
don't
have
quality
teachers to teach them.
In addit
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addition, students
ion students gene
rally
dont
do not
don't
have
any practical knowledge when they graduated from their schools.For
this
reaso
a rational motive for a belief or action
reason
sn they
always
struggle
to adapt their
business
life
.Because company owners always searching practical skill for their employees.But unfou
by bad luck
unfortunately
rtunately peop
le can not show any knowledge in
this
area.
For example
in art schoo
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school
ls stud
ents have to be educated for p
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in
rac
tical skills for their
business
life
.So they
dont
do not
don't
need
to learn histo
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the history
ry of a
rt.Because they can learn
this
infor
a message received and understood
information
mations them
s
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
elf.
In conclusıon people are always obligated to get facts
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the facts
in t
heir all stage
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stage
s scho
ols.Because schools
struggle
to have
quality
students and materials for teaching practical skills.Unfou
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Unfortunately, people
Unfortunately people
rtunately people can
not easily adapt their work
life
because of
this
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this reason
these reasons
reasons.And
they lose minimum their 2 years to get practical skills in their
business
life
.
Then
people always
struggle
to get practical skills in their
business
life
.

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