Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Some of the people argue that people are educated mostly with facts in their all school
life
and school administrators
dont
spar
do not
don't
e time for practical skills for them.I certainly agree with them
this
is because lacking of
quality
teachers and materials .
Th
en
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.
people always
struggle
to get practical skills in their
business
life
.In
this
essay ı will support my view with valid arguments and exapm
les.
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
examples
To begin
with, schools generally spent their time on theor
ical skil
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
theatrical
ls in all stages.Because for practical educa
ion and
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
experiments high
quality
teachers are necce
sary.Unfo
absolutely essential
necessary
u
rtunately schools
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Unfortunately, schools
Unfortunately schools
dont
have
do not
don't
these
quality
teachers.Thats
why they
generally obligate students to learn just facts.For examples mechanical engin
eers stud
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engineer
ent should be informed about engines and they have to examine all parts of these engines.But unfou
rtunately they
by bad luck
unfortunately
can not find any engines in their schools.Because schoo
ls adm
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school
school's
inistrators
dont
allo
do not
don't
cate any budget to get these engines.Even when we assumed that they have engin
es they
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engines, they
dont
have
do not
don't
quality
teachers to teach them.
In addit
ion students gene
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addition, students
rally
dont
have
do not
don't
any practical knowledge when they graduated from their schools.For
this
reaso
sn they
a rational motive for a belief or action
reason
always
struggle
to adapt their
business
life
.Because company owners always searching practical skill for their employees.But unfou
rtunately peop
by bad luck
unfortunately
le can not show any knowledge in
this
area.
For example
in art schoo
ls stud
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school
ents have to be educated for p
rac
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in
tical skills for their
business
life
.So they
dont
need
do not
don't
to learn histo
ry of a
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the history
rt.Because they can learn
this
infor
mations them
a message received and understood
information
s
elf.
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
In conclusıon people are always obligated to get facts
in t
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the facts
heir all stage
s scho
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stage
ols.Because schools
struggle
to have
quality
students and materials for teaching practical skills.Unfou
rtunately people can
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Unfortunately, people
Unfortunately people
not easily adapt their work
life
because of
this
reasons.And
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this reason
these reasons
they lose minimum their 2 years to get practical skills in their
business
life
.
Then
people always
struggle
to get practical skills in their
business
life
.
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